The Empty House
The empty house stood
still and silent,
Alone with the trees
and the wind that chides it—
“Don’t leave us alone
with the tenants that rome
And long for a home!
The dawn creeps
between broken glass
Lighting of courtyard
of dead grass,
Walls now crumbling,
destroyed
With a vicious blast
What scenes of love,
What scenes of hate,
The old house had
seen
I know shall never
abate.
For I had lived there
once.
And now I stand before
The tortured door
And I bow my head
I had lived there,
once.
-Karly, 8-31-12
This poem makes me sad. Its so...depressing, but I don't have any inspiration left for it to make it less bleak. When I first got this image in my head--the image of a broken down house standing on a grey, windswept hill--It didn't seem as dark as it does now. I don't like writing Gothic poems, or even almost-Gothic poems. I suppose I should go to bed and read it again in the morning. Most things seem better in the sunlight of a new day.
I really like this poem, sad poems are second only to funny ones.
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